How to Write a Nursing
Reflective Essay
β Gibbs & Johns Models
A complete, authoritative guide for nursing students and registered nurses β from choosing the right reflective framework to writing a first-class structured reflection with fully worked examples, model answers, and step-by-step writing strategies.
What Is a Nursing Reflective Essay?
A nursing reflective essay is a structured piece of academic and professional writing in which a nurse or nursing student critically examines a specific clinical experience, incident, or interaction. Using a recognised reflective framework β most commonly Gibbs Reflective Cycle (1988) or Johns Model of Structured Reflection (2000) β the writer describes what happened, analyses their thoughts, feelings, and behaviour at the time, evaluates the outcomes, connects the experience to nursing theory and evidence-based practice, and identifies clear, actionable learning for the future.
There is a moment that nearly every nursing student remembers β the first time something genuinely unexpected happened on a clinical placement. Maybe it was a patient who became acutely distressed, or a medication procedure that did not go as planned, or a conversation with a family member that left you questioning whether you had said the right thing. You walk away from that moment carrying a quiet weight: What should I have done differently? What do I know now that I did not know then?
That internal process β that instinct to mentally replay an experience and search for meaning in it β is the raw material of reflective practice. A nursing reflective essay simply asks you to do that instinctively human thing with rigour, structure, and theoretical grounding, so that your learning becomes explicit, shareable, and genuinely transformative rather than just a private feeling that fades.
Understanding what a nursing reflective essay actually is matters because students frequently conflate it with other forms of academic writing. It is not a clinical case study (though clinical details inform it). It is not a research essay (though evidence-based literature underpins it). It is not a diary entry (though personal honesty is essential). It occupies a distinctive space β deeply personal and simultaneously rigorously academic β and that duality is precisely what makes it both challenging and genuinely valuable.
Entity Attributes: Nursing Reflective Essay
Knowledge Graph- First-person academic writing grounded in a real clinical experience
- Structured using a named reflective framework (Gibbs, Johns, SchΓΆn, Rolfe, ERA, Kolb, Atkins & Murphy)
- Combines personal narrative with theoretical analysis and evidence-based literature
- Culminates in an action plan or identified learning for future practice
- Confidentiality maintained through anonymisation of patients and colleagues
One clarification that saves students a great deal of confusion: in nursing, the terms reflective essay, reflective account, and practice reflection are used largely interchangeably, though institutional conventions vary. What they all share is the same intellectual architecture β experience, analysis, theory, learning β regardless of which framework your programme specifies. The framework is the vehicle; critical thinking is the engine.
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Why Reflective Practice Is at the Heart of Nursing
Reflective practice is not a pedagogical trend or an academic hurdle invented by nursing faculties to produce long essays. It is a professional and regulatory expectation embedded in the very definition of what it means to be a competent registered nurse in the twenty-first century.
Reflection is not simply thinking about practice β it is thinking in a particular way that creates new understanding and ultimately changes behaviour. Without that transformation, it is merely rumination.
β Johns, C. (2000). Becoming a Reflective Practitioner. Blackwell ScienceThe Nursing and Midwifery Council (NMC) in the United Kingdom mandates reflective practice as a core element of both initial registration and ongoing revalidation. Every registered nurse must submit five written reflective accounts every three years as part of the revalidation process, demonstrating how their continuing professional development has influenced the way they practise. In the United States, the American Nurses Association (ANA) standards of professional performance explicitly include self-evaluation and professional development, and multiple state boards of nursing recognise reflective portfolios as evidence of continuing competence. This is not paperwork. It is professional accountability made visible.
But beyond the regulatory dimension lies something more fundamental. The American psychologist Donald SchΓΆn, whose influential 1983 work The Reflective Practitioner laid the intellectual groundwork for much of what followed, identified two forms of reflection that sit at the core of professional expertise: reflection-in-action β the real-time adjustments skilled practitioners make as events unfold β and reflection-on-action β the deliberate retrospective analysis that produces transferable learning. Nursing is a profession in which both capacities are constantly in demand. The reflective essay is fundamentally a training ground for reflection-on-action, with the explicit aim of strengthening reflection-in-action at the bedside.
The clinical case for reflective practice is also substantial. Research published in the Journal of Advanced Nursing consistently shows that nurses who engage in structured reflection demonstrate improved clinical decision-making, greater emotional resilience, more nuanced communication with patients and families, and lower rates of compassion fatigue. The mechanism is not mysterious: when you make your reasoning explicit and examine it against theory and evidence, you identify gaps, correct misunderstandings, and embed more sophisticated mental models that you draw upon in future clinical encounters.
Reflective Practice and the NMC Code
The NMC Code (2018) requires all registered nurses to “always practise in line with the best available evidence,” to “keep your knowledge and skills up to date,” and to “take account of your own professional development needs.” Structured reflective writing is one of the most direct ways of evidencing compliance with all three imperatives simultaneously. Even if your programme is not UK-based, understanding the regulatory underpinning of reflective practice clarifies why it carries so much academic weight.
For nursing students specifically, the reflective essay serves a bridging function that no other assignment type quite achieves. It connects the theoretical knowledge you acquire in lectures and textbooks with the messy, ambiguous, emotionally loaded reality of clinical practice. It asks you to hold both worlds simultaneously β the world of what the literature says should happen, and the world of what actually happened in Ward 7 at 3 a.m. on a Tuesday β and to find coherent meaning in the gap between them. That gap, when honestly examined, is where professional growth lives.
Reflective Frameworks Used in Nursing: A Landscape View
Before going deep into Gibbs and Johns β the two frameworks most widely used in nursing curricula globally β it is worth briefly mapping the broader landscape of reflective models. Understanding where Gibbs and Johns sit in relation to other frameworks helps you appreciate the particular strengths and limitations each brings, which in turn helps you choose the most appropriate one for any given assignment or clinical scenario.
Gibbs Reflective Cycle (1988)
Six-stage cyclical model: Description β Feelings β Evaluation β Analysis β Conclusion β Action Plan. Highly structured, ideal for beginners. Encourages iterative, repeated learning from experience.
Johns Model (2000)
Five-element phenomenological model using cue questions to guide structured reflection. More philosophically rigorous than Gibbs; explores internal processes and external factors with greater depth.
SchΓΆn (1983)
Distinguished reflection-in-action from reflection-on-action. Theoretical rather than prescriptive β provides the intellectual basis for all subsequent nursing reflection models without a prescribed writing structure.
Rolfe et al. (2001)
Three-part What/So What/Now What framework. Extremely accessible for short reflective entries and clinical supervision notes. Less granular than Gibbs or Johns but useful for quick, focused reflections.
Kolb Learning Cycle (1984)
Concrete Experience β Reflective Observation β Abstract Conceptualisation β Active Experimentation. More pedagogically focused than clinically focused; often cited in nursing education theory rather than direct reflective writing assignments.
Atkins & Murphy (1994)
Emphasises awareness, description, critical analysis, and development of new perspective. Particularly valued for its explicit inclusion of feelings and its emphasis on synthesis rather than just description.
Of these frameworks, Gibbs dominates undergraduate nursing programmes in the United Kingdom, Ireland, Australia, and increasingly in North American BSN programmes, primarily because its six clearly labelled stages provide a reliable scaffold for students who are new to formal reflective writing. Johns is more prevalent at postgraduate level, in advanced practice nursing, and in programmes with a strong phenomenological or humanistic philosophy of care β particularly in UK higher education institutions with roots in the King’s Fund approach to nurse education.
Which Model Should You Use?
Always check your assignment brief first. If your lecturer has specified a model, use it β even if you personally prefer a different framework. If you have a choice, consider: Are you new to reflective writing? Gibbs is more structured. Do you want to explore the philosophical and contextual dimensions of an experience more deeply? Johns offers richer analytical cues. Is your word count very short (under 600 words)? Rolfe’s What/So What/Now What may be more practical.
One important overarching principle applies regardless of which framework you use: the model is a guide, not a straitjacket. Sophisticated markers are not looking for a mechanical walk through six boxes. They are looking for evidence that you are thinking critically, connecting theory to experience, and demonstrating genuine development as a reflective practitioner. The model provides the architecture; your intellectual honesty and analytical rigour provide the substance.
Gibbs Reflective Cycle: The Complete Guide for Nursing Students
Graham Gibbs introduced his reflective cycle in 1988 in Learning by Doing: A Guide to Teaching and Learning Methods, published by Oxford Polytechnic (now Oxford Brookes University). It was designed as an educational tool to help students extract structured learning from experience β a response to Kolb’s broader experiential learning theory that made the process more accessible and immediately applicable to professional practice.
The cycle comprises six stages that move in sequence from a pure description of events through to a concrete action plan for the future. Its cyclical nature is intentional: Gibbs understood that professional learning is not a linear process but an ongoing spiral in which we return to similar situations again and again, each time equipped with deeper understanding drawn from previous reflections.
Description
What happened? Set the scene factually and concisely. Who was involved? What did you do? What did others do? What was the context or setting?
- What was the situation?
- Who else was present?
- What was your role?
- What happened, in sequence?
Feelings
What were you thinking and feeling at the time and afterwards? This stage requires emotional honesty β including feelings that may be uncomfortable to acknowledge.
- What were you feeling before?
- What were you feeling during?
- What did you feel afterwards?
- What do you feel about it now?
Evaluation
What was good and bad about the experience? Make an objective, balanced assessment rather than only focusing on what went wrong.
- What went well?
- What did not go well?
- What was your contribution?
- What was others’ contribution?
Analysis
What sense do you make of the situation? This is the most academically demanding stage β integrate theory, evidence, and literature to explain the experience.
- Why did things happen as they did?
- What theory explains this?
- What does the literature say?
- What knowledge was I missing?
Conclusion
What else could you have done? Draw together insights from analysis and identify specifically what you would do differently and what you would preserve.
- What have you learned?
- What alternatives existed?
- What skills do you now need?
Action Plan
If the situation arose again, what would you do? Detail concrete, achievable steps for developing the knowledge, skills, or attitudes identified in your conclusion.
- What will you do differently?
- What training will you seek?
- How will you monitor progress?
The Description Stage: Less Is More
One of the most consistent errors nursing students make when using Gibbs is over-writing the description stage. The description should be concise β typically 150 to 250 words in a 2,000-word essay β because its function is purely contextual. You are giving the reader just enough information to understand what happened. Extensive narrative detail at this stage comes at the cost of depth in the analysis, which is where the marks actually live.
Crucially, the description stage is the only stage where you do not need to engage with academic literature. Everything else in the cycle should be supported by references. This surprises many students who assume that a reflective essay is exempt from the evidencing norms of academic writing because it is “personal.” It is not. The analytical stages in particular should demonstrate that your learning and conclusions are grounded in current nursing evidence, not merely personal opinion.
The Feelings Stage: Intellectual Honesty Over Positivity
The feelings stage is frequently written superficially because students assume markers want to see positivity, resilience, and professional composure. In reality, intellectually honest acknowledgment of challenging feelings β anxiety, confusion, inadequacy, moral distress β followed by a thoughtful analysis of those feelings in the context of professional development theory, is far more impressive than a sanitised account that reads like a job application. Feelings are data. Treat them accordingly.
Nursing theorist Patricia Benner’s model of skill acquisition from From Novice to Expert (1984) is particularly useful here. If you felt anxious or overwhelmed in a clinical situation, connecting that feeling to the legitimate cognitive demands placed on a nursing student at the advanced beginner stage of Benner’s framework demonstrates analytical sophistication rather than weakness.
The Analysis Stage: Where Academic Quality Is Made or Lost
The analysis stage is the intellectual core of the Gibbs model and the component that differentiates a first-class reflective essay from an average one. Here, you are expected to move beyond personal observation and interrogate the experience through the lens of nursing theory, evidence-based practice, communication theory, ethical frameworks, and relevant professional guidelines.
What does that look like in practice? Suppose your reflection centres on a situation in which a patient refused medication. A descriptive account of what happened stays at the surface. An analytical account engages with the legal and ethical framework of patient autonomy and informed consent (drawing on the Mental Capacity Act 2005 if in a UK context, or relevant state legislation in the US), considers the nurse’s professional responsibility under the NMC Code, perhaps references Beauchamp and Childress’s four principles of biomedical ethics (autonomy, beneficence, non-maleficence, justice), and reflects on how your communication approach in that moment aligned with or diverged from person-centred care theory. That is analysis. That is where marks are awarded.
The Action Plan: Specific, Not Aspirational
The action plan stage frequently reads like this: “In future, I will communicate more effectively with patients.” This is aspirationally correct and useless as an action plan. A strong action plan identifies specific, achievable, time-bound developmental steps. For example: “I will attend the next scheduled communication skills workshop on my placement, complete the e-learning module on motivational interviewing available on the Trust intranet, and practise using open-ended questions in my next three patient interactions, asking my mentor for feedback on each occasion.” The difference between these two versions is the difference between good intentions and professional accountability.
Johns Model of Structured Reflection: A Deeper Philosophical Lens
Christopher Johns first developed his Model of Structured Reflection in 1994, and subsequently refined it through multiple editions of his influential text Becoming a Reflective Practitioner, now in its fifth edition (2017). Johns drew heavily on Barbara Carper’s seminal 1978 framework of fundamental patterns of knowing in nursing β empirical, ethical, personal, and aesthetic knowing β and on SchΓΆn’s distinction between technical rationality and professional artistry. The result is a model that is at once more philosophically demanding and more phenomenologically rich than Gibbs.
Where Gibbs organises reflection around temporal stages (what happened, then what you felt, then evaluation), Johns organises reflection around ways of knowing and influences on action. The central question Johns asks is not just “What happened?” but “Why did I respond in the way I did, and what does that reveal about my values, assumptions, and understanding of nursing?”
Description of the Experience
What is the phenomenon? Describe the experience in enough detail to understand its context, including what you were trying to achieve and what actually occurred.
- What happened in this situation?
- What was I trying to achieve?
- Why did I respond as I did?
- What were the consequences?
Reflection (Carper’s Patterns)
Explore the experience through Carper’s (1978) four ways of knowing: aesthetic (what I noticed), personal (my values and biases), ethical (what obligations guided me), and empirical (what I knew).
- What was I feeling? (Personal)
- What did I know? (Empirical)
- Was my action ethical? (Ethical)
- What did I notice? (Aesthetic)
Influencing Factors
What internal and external factors influenced the way you responded? This element requires honest examination of power, context, relationships, and institutional constraints.
- What internal factors shaped me?
- What external factors constrained me?
- What sources of knowledge influenced me?
Alternative Strategies
Could you have responded differently? Explore alternative actions and their potential consequences. This element bridges the gap between reflection and transferable learning.
- What other choices existed?
- What would have been the consequences?
- How do other nurses manage this?
Learning
How has this experience changed you? What new understanding, skills, or values have you developed? Connect your learning to your ongoing development as a reflective practitioner.
- How do I feel now?
- How has this changed my practice?
- Am I acting more congruently with my values?
Carper’s Ways of Knowing: The Philosophical Engine
Barbara Carper’s 1978 paper “Fundamental Patterns of Knowing in Nursing,” published in Advances in Nursing Science, identified four epistemological patterns through which nurses know and practise. Johns integrated these directly into his reflective model, and understanding them is essential for using the Johns framework at postgraduate level.
Empirical knowing refers to the scientifically grounded, evidence-based knowledge that nursing draws from research, physiology, pharmacology, and clinical guidelines. In a Johns reflection, empirical knowing asks: what did I know, and what did I not know, about the clinical situation I encountered?
Aesthetic knowing is perhaps the most distinctively nursing form of knowledge β the tacit, embodied understanding of what a situation calls for in a particular moment. It is the difference between knowing what the textbook says about pain management and perceiving, through attentiveness and clinical intuition, what this specific patient needs right now. In reflection, aesthetic knowing prompts the question: what did I notice, and how fully present was I to the unique particularity of this person’s experience?
Personal knowing concerns self-awareness β the nurse’s understanding of their own values, assumptions, biases, and emotional responses. This is the most uncomfortable dimension of reflective practice because it requires genuine confrontation with the internal factors that shape clinical behaviour in ways that are not always aligned with professional ideals. Why did that patient’s manner make me feel dismissive? What assumptions was I carrying about this family’s ability to cope?
Ethical knowing engages with the moral dimensions of care β the obligations, duties, principles, and value conflicts that arise in clinical practice. In a Johns reflection, ethical knowing asks: was my action morally defensible? Whose interests was I serving? Were there competing obligations that I navigated well or poorly?
Why Johns Is Particularly Valued at Postgraduate Level
Johns’ model is more demanding than Gibbs not because its stages are more numerous but because its analytical depth is greater. Carper’s four patterns of knowing invite a kind of self-examination that goes beyond “what happened and how did I feel” to “what does this experience reveal about the kind of nurse I am, the assumptions I carry, and the gaps between my espoused values and my enacted values?” That level of critical reflexivity is what MSN and DNP programmes are developing β and it is precisely what distinguishes advanced reflective practice from beginner reflection.
Influencing Factors: The Dimension Most Students Skip
Element 3 of the Johns model β influencing factors β is the component most often treated superficially or omitted entirely by students who are unfamiliar with the framework’s philosophical underpinnings. Yet it is arguably where the most sophisticated analysis happens.
Johns asks you to examine not only what happened but why you responded as you did β including the external constraints (time pressure, staffing levels, the power dynamics of the clinical hierarchy, institutional protocols) and internal factors (personal values, previous experiences, emotional state, cultural background, educational preparation) that shaped your behaviour. This is structural and contextual analysis, not just personal introspection. A nurse who reflects on why they struggled to challenge a senior colleague’s decision needs to engage with the literature on hierarchical communication in clinical teams, the silence of nursing in historically physician-dominated healthcare environments, and the psychological safety literature β not merely acknowledge “I felt nervous.”
This dimension of Johns reflects the influence of critical social theory on nursing reflection β an intellectual tradition that situates individual clinical behaviour within broader systems of power, organisation, and culture. It is demanding to write well, but it is the dimension that most powerfully connects personal experience to systemic professional development.
Gibbs vs Johns: Choosing the Right Framework for Your Nursing Reflection
Understanding the differences between Gibbs and Johns is not merely an academic exercise β it directly informs which model will serve you better for a particular assignment, clinical scenario, or professional context. Here is a comprehensive comparison.
| Dimension | Gibbs (1988) | Johns (2000) |
|---|---|---|
| Structure | Six named, sequential stages in a cycle | Five elements organised around cue questions |
| Philosophical Base | Experiential learning theory (Kolb 1984); pragmatic educational model | Phenomenology; Carper’s patterns of knowing; SchΓΆn’s reflective practice |
| Best Suited For | Undergraduate students; BSN level; first clinical reflections; structured assignments with clearly labelled sections | Postgraduate/advanced practice; MSN/DNP; experienced nurses; practice improvement portfolios; critical incident analysis |
| Analytical Depth | Moderate β analysis stage explicit but bounded within the cycle | High β Carper’s four patterns of knowing and influencing factors require multi-dimensional critical analysis |
| Treatment of Feelings | Dedicated stage (Stage 2); discrete and explicit | Embedded throughout, particularly in personal knowing (Element 2) |
| Structural Transparency | Very high β clearly labelled stages make it easy to check completeness | Moderate β cue questions guide the writer but structure less immediately visible to the reader |
| Emphasis on Context/Power | Limited β situational factors mentioned implicitly | Strong β influencing factors element explicitly examines internal and external constraints |
| Action Orientation | Explicit action plan (Stage 6) with concrete developmental steps | Learning element addresses change but less prescriptive about future actions |
| Widely Used In | UK, Ireland, Australia, Canada BSN programmes; many US nursing schools | UK postgraduate nursing; advanced practice nursing; King’s Fund/Transformational Leadership programmes |
| Word Count Fit | Flexible β works well from 800 to 5,000 words | Better suited to longer reflections (1,500 words minimum to do justice to all elements) |
The practical takeaway: if your assignment brief specifies one model, use it. If you have freedom of choice, consider the nature of your experience, your level of study, and the depth of analysis expected. A student in their first clinical placement year, writing 1,500 words about their first experience administering an IV medication, will probably produce a stronger piece using Gibbs. An MSN student reflecting on a complex ethical dilemma they navigated as a charge nurse on a neurosurgical unit will find Johns a far more powerful analytical tool.
For students seeking support in understanding how to apply either model to specific nursing assignments, Smart Academic Writing’s team of registered nurses provides guidance through their nursing reflection paper service, which covers both Gibbs and Johns frameworks across all levels of nursing education.
How to Write a Nursing Reflective Essay: The Complete Process
Knowing what Gibbs and Johns say in theory is very different from sitting down and actually producing 2,500 words of critical, theoretically grounded nursing reflection. This section walks you through the entire writing process, from choosing your experience through to final proofreading β with the concrete, practical guidance that textbooks on reflective practice routinely omit.
Choose Your Experience Strategically
The experience you choose to reflect on matters enormously. The best reflective essays emerge from experiences that genuinely challenged you β situations where you felt uncertain, where something unexpected happened, where a clinical or ethical dilemma arose, or where you identified a real gap between what you knew and what you needed to know. Comfortable, straightforward experiences produce thin reflections. Choose an experience that gave you something to work with intellectually and emotionally. It does not need to be dramatic β a quiet, difficult conversation with a patient about their prognosis can yield richer reflection than a high-acuity emergency if you were more genuinely challenged in the former. Ensure the experience is recent enough that you can recall the details accurately, and that it can be fully anonymised.
Write Your Unfiltered Notes First
Before you open a blank document with a word count in mind, write freely. Reconstruct the experience in as much detail as you can recall β what you saw, heard, said, felt, noticed, assumed, and doubted. Write honestly about your emotional responses, including ones that feel professionally uncomfortable. At this stage, write for yourself, not for your marker. You will edit this raw material heavily, but the act of uncensored reconstruction produces the honest, specific detail that distinguishes vivid, authentic reflective writing from generic, sanitised accounts. Many students skip this step and write directly into the framework β and produce correspondingly generic results.
Map Your Raw Notes to the Framework
With your raw notes in front of you, work through the stages or elements of your chosen framework and map pieces of your notes to each one. For Gibbs: which parts of your notes speak to description? Which to feelings? Which observations could ground an evaluation? What questions does the experience raise that point toward analysis? For Johns: which moments in the experience illuminate aesthetic knowing, personal knowing, ethical knowing, empirical knowing? What influences β internal and external β can you identify? This mapping process prevents the common error of writing a linear narrative and then retrospectively labelling sections as “Feelings” or “Analysis” without genuine engagement with what those stages actually require.
Conduct Your Literature Review
Identify the theoretical, clinical, and professional concepts your experience raises and conduct targeted literature searches. This is where many students underinvest β and where marks are most readily gained or lost. If your reflection concerns pain management, search for current evidence on multimodal analgesia, patient-controlled analgesia, non-pharmacological pain management, and nursing assessment tools for pain. If your reflection concerns end-of-life communication, search for palliative care communication frameworks, truth-telling in nursing ethics, and therapeutic communication theory. Use CINAHL, PubMed, and your university library database. Aim for primary sources (original research papers) and authoritative secondary sources (systematic reviews, professional guidelines, NMC Code). Cite using your institution’s required referencing style β most commonly APA 7th edition.
Write a Focused Introduction
Your introduction should be brief β 100 to 150 words in most assignments β and should accomplish three things: introduce the focus of your reflection (the nature of the experience without identifying details), name the reflective framework you are using and briefly justify why, and indicate the key themes or areas of learning the reflection will address. Avoid long, slow starts that merely describe what you are about to do. Get to the point efficiently and signal to the reader immediately that you have a clear analytical purpose.
Write Each Stage with Both Evidence and Honesty
Work through each stage or element systematically, allocating word count proportionally to academic weight. In Gibbs: description and feelings together should take up no more than 20% of your total word count. Evaluation and analysis together should take up 45 to 50%. Conclusion and action plan together account for the remaining 30 to 35%. In Johns: description should be brief; the reflection (Carper’s patterns) and influencing factors should be the substantive analytical core; learning should be specific and forward-looking. Throughout, maintain the first-person voice, support analytical claims with referenced literature, and preserve patient/colleague anonymity at all times.
Write a Purposeful Conclusion
Do not merely summarise what you have already written. The conclusion of a reflective essay should synthesise your key learning and signal the specific changes it will produce in your practice. Connect your personal learning back to broader professional development themes where possible β perhaps acknowledging how this experience has deepened your understanding of a specific NMC Standard of Proficiency, or how it has motivated you to pursue a particular area of continuing professional development. End with a sentence that leaves the reader with a sense of forward momentum, not closure.
Proofread Specifically for Reflective Writing Errors
Beyond standard proofreading, check specifically for the errors most common in reflective writing: slipping into third person, making unsupported claims in the analysis stage, writing a description that is too long, having an action plan that is too vague, and using medical diagnoses to identify patients (a confidentiality breach). Read your essay aloud β passages where the logic is unclear or the voice is inconsistent will become immediately apparent when spoken rather than read silently.
Three Fully Worked Nursing Reflective Essay Examples
The following examples demonstrate how the Gibbs and Johns frameworks translate into actual written paragraphs. These are model extracts, not complete essays β each represents approximately one third of a full submission. Use them as quality benchmarks and structural models, not as templates to copy. Your own clinical experience, analysis, and learning must drive your reflection.
Example 1: Gibbs β Medication Administration Error (Near-Miss)
Undergraduate Β· 2,000 words Β· APA 7thExample 2: Johns β End-of-Life Communication with a Patient’s Family
Postgraduate MSN Β· 3,000 words Β· APA 7thExample 3: Gibbs β Escalating a Deteriorating Patient (SBAR Communication)
BSN Year 2 Β· 1,500 words Β· HarvardWhat All Three Examples Have in Common
Each example demonstrates specific rather than generic writing, honest engagement with feelings including uncomfortable ones, genuine theoretical analysis grounded in referenced literature, an understanding of the connection between the individual experience and systemic or professional context, and an action plan with concrete, achievable steps. These features β not the clinical scenario chosen β are what determine reflective essay quality.
Nursing Reflective Essay Structure, Word Count, and Formatting
Structural discipline is what separates a reflection that feels intellectually powerful from one that meanders and frustrates the reader. The challenge is that reflective writing β by virtue of being personal and exploratory β can feel at odds with the tight structural conventions of academic writing. It does not have to be.
Typical Word Count by Level of Study
Recommended Word Count Distribution β Gibbs (2,000-word Essay)
| Stage | Recommended Words | % of Total | Rationale |
|---|---|---|---|
| Introduction | 120β150 | ~7% | Frame the essay; name model; indicate themes |
| Description | 150β200 | ~9% | Context only; no analysis; no references needed |
| Feelings | 180β220 | ~10% | Honest; supported by professional development theory |
| Evaluation | 200β250 | ~11% | Balanced; begin referencing here |
| Analysis | 600β700 | ~32% | Core academic content; most references; deepest engagement |
| Conclusion | 200β250 | ~11% | Synthesise; identify specific learning |
| Action Plan | 250β300 | ~13% | Concrete, SMART developmental steps |
| Concluding Paragraph | 100β130 | ~6% | Final synthesis; forward-looking close |
First Person, Present and Past Tense: Navigating Voice
Reflective nursing essays should be written in the first person (I, my, me, we) throughout. This is one of the few academic writing contexts where first-person voice is not only permitted but expected and required. Some students import habits from essay and research writing and either slip unconsciously into the third person (“the nurse felt”) or actively avoid “I” out of a mistaken belief that it signals subjectivity. In reflective writing, subjectivity is the entire point β your personal perspective on your own experience is what the essay is documenting.
Use past tense for describing what happened and what you felt at the time, and present tense for statements about what you now understand, believe, or intend to do. Mixing tenses coherently β rather than inconsistently β is a marker of reflective fluency.
Using Headings in a Reflective Essay
Different institutions and programmes have different conventions on whether headings (e.g., “Description,” “Analysis”) should be used in reflective essays. Some programmes require them as a structural check; others ask for prose-only essays in which the framework is implicit rather than labelled. Check your assignment brief. If headings are not specified, you can still make your structure transparent through transitional phrasing: “Reflecting now on my feelings during that encounter…” or “Turning to an analysis of the factors that shaped my response…” signals stage transitions to the reader without requiring a formal subheading.
Referencing Your Nursing Reflective Essay: What to Cite and How
One of the most consistent misconceptions among nursing students is that reflective essays do not need references because they are “personal” writing. This is incorrect. The personal narrative provides the experiential context; the academic framework provides the analytical rigour. Both require evidential grounding. A reflective essay without references is not a reflective essay β it is a journal entry.
What Types of Sources Should You Reference?
- The reflective framework itself β always cite the original source (e.g., Gibbs 1988, Johns 2000)
- Nursing theories relevant to your analysis (e.g., Benner 1984, Carper 1978, Orem’s Self-Care Theory)
- Clinical evidence related to the patient care situation you describe
- Communication theories and frameworks (e.g., Egan’s Skilled Helper, motivational interviewing literature)
- Ethical frameworks and principles (e.g., Beauchamp & Childress 2019)
- Professional guidelines and standards (NMC Code, ANA Standards, NICE guidelines, NHS Improvement guidance)
- Educational and professional development theory (e.g., Kolb 1984, Benner 1984, SchΓΆn 1983)
- Patient safety and quality improvement literature (e.g., IHI frameworks, NHS Patient Safety Incident frameworks)
Avoid These Referencing Errors
- Citing Wikipedia, general health websites, or non-peer-reviewed sources in the analysis stage
- Over-relying on a single source β strong academic writing draws on multiple independent sources to support each major claim
- Citing sources you have not read in full β secondary citations (“cited in”) should be used only when the primary source is genuinely inaccessible
- Incorrect date attribution β Gibbs’ cycle is 1988, not 1992; Johns’ model is attributed to 1994 (original) or 2000 (revised edition) depending on which edition your institution requires
- Referencing the reflective framework but not applying it β naming Gibbs and moving on without structuring your writing through the cycle is a common and costly error
For support with formatting references, particularly in APA 7th edition, Harvard, or Vancouver styles across nursing assignments, Smart Academic Writing’s formatting and citation assistance service supports nursing students across all major referencing conventions.
Confidentiality and Ethical Considerations in Nursing Reflection
Confidentiality in nursing reflective writing is not merely an academic convention β it is a professional and legal obligation. The NMC Code (2018) Clause 5 requires all registered nurses to “respect people’s right to privacy and confidentiality.” GDPR (General Data Protection Regulation) in the UK and EU, and HIPAA in the United States, provide the legal framework within which this professional obligation operates. Breaching patient confidentiality in a reflective essay is not only an academic integrity violation β it can constitute professional misconduct.
Anonymisation is therefore mandatory and must be thorough. It is not sufficient to change a patient’s first name. You must also change or omit: surname, age (or use an approximate age range), ethnicity if identifying, specific diagnosis if identifying, ward name, hospital name, date, specific medication names if identifying, and any other detail that could allow identification by someone with knowledge of the clinical environment. When in doubt, omit the detail β its clinical specificity is almost never as important to the reflective analysis as students assume.
β Appropriate Anonymisation
- “I will refer to this patient as Mrs A, a patient in her mid-seventies…”
- “A male patient in his late fifties whom I will call Mr B…”
- “A colleague, who I will refer to as Nurse C…”
- “The incident occurred during a night shift on a medical ward”
- Changing specific diagnosis to a category: “a patient with advanced malignancy”
β Insufficient Anonymisation
- Changing only the first name while retaining age, diagnosis, and ward
- Including the specific hospital and ward name
- Naming the exact medication and dose combination alongside other identifiers
- Describing a uniquely unusual clinical presentation that could identify the patient
- Including the exact date of the incident alongside other clinical details
The same principle applies to colleagues and other members of the healthcare team. If your reflection involves a difficult interaction with a senior colleague, manager, or physician, that person must be anonymised with the same rigour as a patient. Many students overlook this because colleagues feel less “vulnerable” than patients, but the professional and legal protection of confidentiality applies equally.
One further ethical consideration: if the experience you are reflecting on involved a clinical incident that was formally reported (a near-miss, an adverse event, a formal complaint), ensure that your reflective essay does not reveal information that could compromise ongoing investigative processes. Seek advice from your placement coordinator or academic supervisor if in doubt.
The Nine Most Common Nursing Reflective Essay Mistakes β and How to Avoid Them
After reviewing thousands of nursing reflective essays, certain patterns of error recur so consistently that they merit specific, direct attention. Avoiding these nine mistakes will not guarantee a first-class grade β originality of thought and depth of analysis determine that β but committing them will reliably suppress your mark regardless of your insights.
| β Mistake | Why It Costs Marks | β The Fix |
|---|---|---|
| Over-long description | Consumes word count allocated to analysis; signals inability to distinguish relevant from irrelevant detail | Limit description to 10% of total word count; include only details that directly inform the analytical stages |
| No references in analysis | Analysis becomes personal opinion rather than evidence-based reasoning; directly penalised against academic criteria | Every analytical claim needs supporting literature; aim for a minimum of 8β12 references in a 2,000-word essay |
| Superficial feelings stage | Suggests the student is writing for the marker rather than reflecting honestly; misses the professional development dimension | Include uncomfortable feelings; use professional development theory to contextualise them (Benner, Egan, SchΓΆn) |
| Vague action plan | “I will improve my communication” is not a plan; evidences absence of genuine critical learning | SMART criteria: Specific, Measurable, Achievable, Relevant, Time-bound; name exact resources, timelines, and feedback mechanisms |
| Slipping into third person | Creates clinical distance that undermines the reflective register; reads as evasion rather than engagement | Write and proofread specifically for “the nurse” or “the student” and replace with “I” |
| Describing perfect practice | Rings false; undermines credibility; provides nothing to reflect on; markers cannot reward non-existent analysis | Choose an experience with genuine challenge, ambiguity, or gap; honest accounts of imperfect practice produce better essays |
| Mechanical framework application | “Description: what happened was X. Feelings: I felt Y. Evaluation…” reads like a form, not a reflection | Write in flowing prose that moves between stages organically; use transitional language rather than labelling each paragraph |
| Inadequate anonymisation | Professional misconduct risk; automatic academic penalty at most institutions; could affect registration | Remove all potentially identifying details; when in doubt, remove the detail entirely; get a second pair of eyes to check |
| Confusing the event with the essay | The essay is not a report of what happened; it is an analysis of what it meant and what you learned from it | Keep description brief; focus most cognitive and word-count energy on analysis, evaluation, and learning |
Beyond Gibbs and Johns: Other Reflective Approaches in Nursing Education
While Gibbs and Johns dominate nursing curricula globally, a working familiarity with other reflective frameworks broadens your analytical vocabulary and equips you for the diverse demands of a nursing career β particularly at postgraduate level, where you are expected to choose and justify your reflective approach rather than simply apply a prescribed model.
Rolfe, Freshwater, and Jasper (2001) β What? So What? Now What?
Rolfe’s framework is deceptively simple. Three questions: What? (description and statement of the event) β So What? (analysis of the significance of the event) β Now What? (proposed actions for future practice). Its simplicity is its greatest strength and its most significant limitation. For clinical supervision notes, brief reflective logs, and short portfolio entries, Rolfe provides an efficient structure that still demands genuine reflection. For longer academic essays, it is too open-ended to guarantee the analytical depth that markers typically require at BSN level and above.
Atkins and Murphy (1994)
Atkins and Murphy developed their model specifically for nursing practice. It comprises five stages: Awareness of uncomfortable feelings or thoughts β Description of the situation β Analysis of feelings and knowledge β Developing new perspectives β Evaluating outcomes. The model’s explicit starting point β awareness of uncomfortable feelings or thoughts β makes it particularly well-suited to reflections centred on moral distress, ethical conflict, or emotionally challenging clinical encounters. It does not prescribe the analytical frameworks you use (unlike Johns, which directs you to Carper), which gives it flexibility at the cost of some analytical structure.
ERA Cycle (Jasper, 2003)
The ERA (Experience, Reflection, Action) cycle developed by Melanie Jasper is one of the most accessible entry-level frameworks for reflective practice in nursing. Its three components map loosely onto Rolfe’s What/So What/Now What, but Jasper’s framing is more explicitly connected to the ongoing professional development cycle. The ERA cycle is most commonly encountered in first-year nursing programmes as an introductory framework before students move to the greater complexity of Gibbs or Johns.
Recommended Reading for Reflective Practice in Nursing
These are the authoritative texts you should engage with for any nursing reflective writing at degree level or above. They are available through most university library systems and are the primary sources you should cite in your essays.
- Gibbs, G. (1988). Learning by Doing: A Guide to Teaching and Learning Methods. Oxford Polytechnic Further Education Unit.
- Johns, C. (2017). Becoming a Reflective Practitioner (5th ed.). Wiley-Blackwell.
- SchΓΆn, D. A. (1983). The Reflective Practitioner: How Professionals Think in Action. Basic Books.
- Benner, P. (1984). From Novice to Expert: Excellence and Power in Clinical Nursing Practice. Addison-Wesley.
- Carper, B. A. (1978). Fundamental patterns of knowing in nursing. Advances in Nursing Science, 1(1), 13β23. [doi.org/10.1097/00012272-197810000-00004]
- NMC. (2018). The Code: Professional Standards of Practice and Behaviour for Nurses, Midwives and Nursing Associates. Nursing and Midwifery Council. [nmc.org.uk/standards/code/]
Nursing Reflection Beyond Academia: Revalidation and CPD
For many nursing students, reflective essays feel like a purely academic requirement that will cease to be relevant once they are registered. This is a misconception that can create a problematic discontinuity in professional development. Reflective practice does not end at registration β it intensifies.
The NMC revalidation framework requires every registered nurse in the United Kingdom to demonstrate, every three years, that they are practising safely and effectively. One core component of that process is five written reflective accounts. These accounts are expected to demonstrate engagement with the NMC Code, to draw on learning from continuing professional development activities, and to reflect on practice and feedback from patients, families, or colleagues. The format is not as prescriptive as a student reflective essay, but the intellectual architecture is identical β description of what happened, reflection on what it meant, analysis of what you learned, and evidence of how your practice has changed as a result.
In the United States, continuing competence requirements vary by state, but most state boards of nursing recognise reflective portfolios and professional development logs as evidence of ongoing competence. Advanced Practice Registered Nurses (APRNs) in most states are required to demonstrate ongoing professional development, and reflective documentation is increasingly accepted as currency within that system.
The practical implication for nursing students is this: the reflective writing skills you develop in your academic programme are not merely tools for passing assignments. They are the foundation of a career-long professional accountability practice. Students who invest in developing these skills now β who learn to choose experiences thoughtfully, reflect honestly, analyse rigorously, and translate reflection into specific developmental action β enter registered practice with a significant professional advantage over those who completed the same assignments mechanically.
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Writing a First-Class Nursing Reflective Essay: Advanced Craft Considerations
Technical competence β correctly applying the framework, referencing appropriately, maintaining confidentiality β gets you to a pass or a merit. What elevates a nursing reflective essay to first-class quality is something more elusive, but not mysterious. It comes down to four qualities: intellectual honesty, analytical precision, theoretical range, and forward momentum.
Intellectual Honesty: The Most Distinctive Quality in Reflective Writing
Markers read hundreds of nursing reflective essays. The ones that stand out are almost never the ones describing the most dramatic clinical scenarios. They are the ones in which the writer is visibly, genuinely honest about their own limitations, confusions, fears, and failures β and then demonstrates the courage and rigour to examine those honestly through theoretical lenses. A first-class essay about a relatively routine medication administration concern, written with complete intellectual honesty, will nearly always outperform a merit-standard essay about a cardiac arrest.
Intellectual honesty in reflective writing means resisting the temptation to present a more competent, composed, or emotionally regulated version of yourself than was actually present in the clinical situation. It means including the moments of doubt, the errors of judgment, the feelings of inadequacy, and then examining them with analytical precision rather than either self-flagellating over them or minimising them.
Analytical Precision: Showing Your Thinking
Strong analytical writing in a nursing reflective essay does not just state that “communication is important” or that “patient-centred care is a core nursing value.” It shows exactly how a specific principle from a specific theoretical source illuminates a specific moment in your specific clinical experience. This requires you to make explicit connections that less sophisticated writers leave implicit. The distance between “communication is important and I could have communicated better” and “the communication failure I experienced in this encounter aligns with the pattern of hierarchical silence documented by Maxfield et al. (2005) in their AHRQ-sponsored study of healthcare communication failures, in which 77% of nurses reported failing to speak up when they had concerns, citing fears of negative relationships with senior colleagues” β that distance is the distance between a basic pass and a first-class essay.
Theoretical Range: Drawing on Multiple Intellectual Traditions
A hallmark of sophisticated nursing reflection is the ability to bring multiple theoretical frameworks to bear on a single experience. An experience of poor team communication might be illuminated by psychological safety theory (Edmondson 1999), Transactional Analysis (Berne 1964, applied to the nurse-physician relationship), systems theory (Reason’s Swiss Cheese model), and person-centred care theory (Rogers 1961), as well as the NMC Code and clinical evidence on communication and patient outcomes. Drawing on this range does not mean mentioning each theory in passing β it means applying each one specifically to different dimensions of the experience to produce a genuinely multi-layered analysis. This theoretical range signals academic maturity to markers far more effectively than extensive description of clinical events.
Forward Momentum: The Essay Should Carry the Reader Into Your Future
The best nursing reflective essays end with a sense of genuine forward movement. The reader should feel, after the final paragraph, that the writer has not merely completed an exercise but has genuinely changed β that they are walking out of the essay into a different clinical future from the one they were in before the experience they described. This is what the action plan and concluding sections are for. The quality of that forward-looking close depends entirely on the quality and honesty of the reflection that precedes it. You cannot manufacture a genuinely transformative conclusion without having actually engaged in transformative reflection. Which is, of course, exactly why reflective practice matters.
FAQs: Your Burning Questions About Nursing Reflective Essays Answered
Bringing It All Together: Becoming a Reflective Practitioner
Writing a nursing reflective essay is not a linear process with a clear beginning and end. It is an introduction to a habit of mind β a way of engaging with clinical experience that, when practiced consistently and rigorously, transforms competent practitioners into expert ones. Gibbs and Johns provide two of the most powerful frameworks available for structuring that habit in written form, and understanding both of them β their philosophical underpinnings, their structural differences, and their respective strengths β equips you to choose the right analytical tool for any reflective task you encounter.
The most important things to carry from this guide are these: description is not reflection β analysis is. Feelings are data, not decoration. References are not optional. Anonymisation is a professional obligation, not a courtesy. Action plans must be specific to be meaningful. And intellectual honesty β the willingness to examine the gap between your ideal self and your actual performance in a difficult moment β is what transforms a competent piece of academic writing into a genuine act of professional development.
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