Instructions In this unit, we learned about management, organizational structures, and open and closed systems. Write an essay in which you expand on the following topics. Describe management, organization, and….
Do an analytical assessment, research paper, or policy memorandum of 12 double spaced paper
Task: Do an analytical assessment, research paper, or policy memorandum of 12 double spaced paper. Write it with your best writing ability. It is supposed to be a professional paper with a very official tone.
There is no required topic for this paper. Everything is negotiable as long as it has a strong connection to the <link is hidden> relationship. In the beginning, I thought topics related to trade might be interesting, so I gave some of my rough thoughts in the attachment “instruction.”
As you see, my ideas were broad and unorganized. So, I asked the previous writer to be critical and develop a complete work based on the ideas (not necessarily has to use my ideas, you can have your own thoughts for the topic). However, the paper was still very disappointing.
In the writer’s work (please see “Revision Request”), the main substance seems to be the impact of US-China trade disruption on Taiwan and Vietnam’s economies. However, the whole paper is very unclear—lots of points needing clarification. I cannot see a specific “central question” and the core thesis that the writer wants to prove/suggest/ or propose. All I see is he/she tried to mess all my rough thoughts in a paper without a clear storyline and a thesis. These different elements in the essay did not be brought together with a coherent and well supported and well explained overall message for the paper. Overall, it is extremely dissatisfying. At first, I did a sentence by sentence comment. However, I found that the whole paper needed to be rewritten. Thus, please look at the “instruction” first, review the “draft” (revision request), and then try to produce a marvelous paper. It is important to be critical of the issues you are discussing, recommend policies, and cite when you need to.
Remember, the task is to do an analytical assessment, research paper, or policy memorandum of 12 double-spaced papers. Write it with your best writing ability. It is supposed to be a professional paper with a very official tone.
Since I am ordering it as “Rewriting”, I prefer to stick with the trade-related topic. But if you think the draft is really terrible or more confident with another U.S-Asia relationship critical issues, please get my permission in prior.
Try to find a more specific “central question”. Narrow a broad idea down and write everything explicitly.